A letter to a friend

Dear Peter,

I'm really excited about your sister's birthday. It's a fantastic idea to book the Majestic Hotel for the party, but it's not cheap and we could consider other options. I have a good friend who could advise about help us with this.

Your sister enjoys making trips and she loves Spanish beaches, so our gift could be a trip to Mallorca for a week.

I'd like to help you the day before the celebration, but it's will be impossible because I'll be working, but you don't hesitate to tell me if there are something is anything more that I can do.

In my opinion it would be a fantastic surprise to invite Maria and Anne, your sister's best friends at primary school. She hasn't seen them for ages, so it'd be amazing.

I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes,

Aureli Sanchez.

Nice job Aureli.

A letter to a friend

Dear Peter,

I'm really excited about your sister's birthday. It's a fantastic idea to book the Majestic Hotel for the party, but it's not cheap and we should consider other options. I have a good friend who can advise us about this.

Your sister enjoys going on trips and she loves Spanish beaches, so, our gift could be a trip to Mallorca for a week.

I'd like to help you the day before the celebration, but it's impossible because I'll be working. However, please don't hesitate to tell me if there is something more that I can do to help.

I think it would be a fantastic surprise to invite Maria and Anne; your sister's best friends from primary school. She hasn't seen them for ages so it'd be amazing.

I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes,

Aureli Sanchez.

Hey man! In your last paragraph I changed, "In my opinion..." because it seemed a little formal for the tone of the letter. Hey Aureli, I'm wondering if you could do me a favour. Could you please look at my Teacher Profile and intro video and tell me what you think. I've reduced my price in the hope of getting some students. Is my video ok? Thanks mate.

Phil.