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Big scale rumours: its danger Maybe you know, Mexico City is a big city which has a large record on earthquakes effects. Since last two years, aproximately, we had had several sismic movements with less span between each event. In March 20, 2012 I personally suffered what for me meant the most strong earthquake's experience, a seismic registering 7.9 on the Ritcher scale. During those days, I was living alone in 5th floor of an old building. I was writing my bachelor's dissertation when suddenly, I started to feel a little dizzy but I thought myself "it is not a dizzy, it is an earthquake". My building was located near the university, so the alarms bell had started to ring confirming my suspicions. I walked to a secure place but I was feeling an strange and vague sensation of calm mixed with anxiety while the time seems eternal. I have to say you that I draw the worst picture. After that, I knew that many people had the same sensations. So, now I can understand in a best way a lot of earthquake's mature people experiences. Recently, we had felt others earthquakes which had not the same magnitud, but had had enough power to alarm the Mexico City's habitants. This fact had carried out to several kind of rumours mainly related with a big earthquake of potential destructive effects.Of course, this information have not some scientific bases, however, sometimes people sprawl carelessly what they listen or neglect the dangerous associated. Fortunately, the Geophysics Institute had done a couple of interviews to clarify them some interesting points and to stop this dangerous practice.

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     Maybe As you may know, Mexico City is a big large city which has had a large long record on of earthquake effects activity. Since last Over approximately the past two years we had had have experienced several sismic movements events that have occured with less and less span time between each event them. In On March 20, 2012 I personally suffered through what for me meant the most strong the most powerful earthquake of my life: a quake registering 7.9 on the Ritcher Scale. 


     During In those days, I was living alone in on the 5th floor of an old building. As I was writing my bachelor's dissertation, I when suddenly started to feel a little dizzy, but I thought to myself, It is "I'm not a dizzy, it is an earthquake!"

     My building was located near the university, so and the alarm bells had started to ring; confirming my suspicion. I walked to a secure place, but I was feeling had a strange and yet vague sensation of calm mixed with anxiety while the time seemed eternal to stand still. I have to say you that I draw the worst picture. It is hard for me to describe, but After that since that day, I knew that have met many people who had the same sensations. So, now I can understand in a best way a lot of earthquake's mature people experiences.

     Recently, we had felt others are alarmed because we have been hit with a series of less-powerful earthquakes. which had not the same magnitud, but had had enough power to alarm the Mexico City's habitants This fact had carried out to several kind of has spurred rumours mainly related with of a bigger earthquake happening in the future. of potential destructive effects.Of course this information have not some scientific bases, however, sometimes people sprawl carelessly what they listen or neglect the dangerous associated. Scientists have not supported the rumours, yet sometimes people like to embellish things that they hear, causing needless alarm, and others carelessly ignore any warnings.

     Fortunately, the Geophysics Institute has done a couple of media interviews to clarify them some interesting points, and to stop this admonish the citizens of Mexico City against this dangerous practice.

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Large scale rumours: their danger

Maybe you know, Mexico City is a big city which has had a long record of earthquakes. During the last two years, approximately, we have had several seismic events with a short span between each event. In March 20, 2012 I personally suffered through what for me was thestrongest earthquake in my experience, with a seismic reading of 7.9 on the Ritcher scale.

During those days, I was living alone on the 5th floor of an old building. I was writing my bachelor's dissertation when, suddenly, I started to feel a little dizzy but I thought to myself "it is not dizziness, it is an earthquake". My building was located near the university, so alarm bells had started to ring confirming my suspicions.

I walked to a secure place but I was feeling a strange and vague sensation of calm mixed with anxiety while the time seemed eternal. I have to say that I imagined the worst picture. After that, I learned that many people had had the same sensations. So, now I can understand in the best way a lot of older people's earthquake experiences.

Recently, we have felt other earthquakes which did not have the same magnitude, but had enough power to alarm Mexico City's inhabitants. This fact has led to several kinds of rumours mainly related to a big earthquake with potential destructive effects.  Of course, this information was without scientific basis, however, sometimes people draw dangerous conclusions when they listen to rumors or neglect the associated dangers.

Fortunately, the Geophysics Institute has done a couple of interviews to clarify some interesting points and to stop this dangerous practice.

 

Hola Mayra,

 

Wow,  we went through a very similar earthquake in Seattle about 12 years ago.  Until that time I had wanted to experience an earthquake.  Now... No thanks!

 

I think that the similarity between "largo" and "large" causes people to think they are the same.  But in English "large" = "grande",  "long" = "largo".  I'm sure you know this, sometimes I make similar mistakes when I'm trying to write a lot of text in Spanish.

 

We say "on" where in Spanish you say "in" in many situations.  I experience the reverse problem trying to write Spanish and know whether to use "in" or "on".   I'm hoping experience will solve the problem!  

 

We say "I was dizzy", or "I experienced dizziness".  You could also say "I experienced the state of dizziness", or "I experienced being dizzy",  I'm sure all this will make you dizzy!

 

"During those days" is ok, you could also say "At that time".

 

For "I imagined the worst picture" you could also just say "I imagined the worst".

 

With respect to "Large scale rumours: their danger"  you could also say "Large scale rumour: its danger".  Did you know that the English version is "rumour" and the EEUU version is "rumor"?  Be aware that some of my ways of saying things my be at odds with what an Englishman might say.

 

¡Muy bueno Mayra!

 

 

 

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Big scale rumours: its danger

Maybe you know that Mexico City is a big city which has a large record long history of the disastrous effects of on earthquakes. effects. Since In  the last two years, aproximately, we have had several seismic movements with a diminishing amount of time less span between each event. In March 20, 2012 I personally suffered experienced, what was for me, meant the most strongest earthquake's experience, a seismic event registering 7.9 on the Ritcher scale.

During those days, I was living alone on the 5th floor of an old building. I was writing my bachelor's dissertation when suddenly, I started to feel a little dizzy but I thought to myself "it this is not a dizzyness, it is an earthquake". My building was located near the university and  so the alarms bell had started to ring confirming my suspicions.

I walked to a secure place but I was feeling an strange and vague sensation of calm mixed with anxiety while the time seemed to stand still. (an English expression) eternal. I have to say to you that I draw the worst picture of that day's event. After that, I knew that many people had the same sensations that I had. So, now I have a better understanding of can understand in a best way a lot of earthquake's mature people's experiences during an earthquake. 

Recently, we have felt others earthquakes,  which had not of the same magnitude, but had had with enough power to alarm the inhabitants of Mexico City's habitants. This has spawned many fact had carried out to several kind of rumours mainly related with to a big future large and  potentially destructive earthquake. of potential destructive effects.Of course, this information have not some these rumours have no scientific basis. however, Sometimes people sprawl are carelessly what when they listen to the warnings or neglect the dangers associated with the earthquakes. (I was not clear on your intended meaning of this last sentence.  I hope this is what you had wanted to say)

Fortunately, the Geophysics Institute has been interviewed done a couple times of interviews to clarify to the public them some of the interesting points related to earthquakes and in an effort to stop this dangerous practice.

Well done Mayra for a very difficult and complex topic! Most of my changes involving rearranging some sentences to help make your topic clearer and  more natural.  Keep up your excellent work!

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