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You Are Hero Failure is the mother of success. If there is nothing good about failure, how can it be the mother of success?You are the real hero of the match in my eyes, I don’t care if you are the first person crossed the finishing line,However ,you tried ,you are the hero.what is more, I really appraciate your spirit,you never say die,never give up.as far as I am concened, The finishing line is not the destination, Humans should always transcend their limits,perhaps,failure is considered a great shame, Your hopes are all over, all your efforts came to nothing,it makes you sad,let us feel regretful ,but please change your opinion,you have tried your best ,we don’t think you are the loser, you are brave ,you are firm, you finished your work with your ingredient of perseverance. Our efforts must begin anew,we should not be afraid of failure ,we are proud of you !

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You Are a Hero

Failure is the mother of success. If there is nothing good about failure, how can it be the mother of success?

 

You are the real hero of the match in my eyes. I don’t care if you are the first person who crossed the finishing line.

 

However ,you tried ,you are the hero.what is more, I really appraciate your spirit,you never say die,never give up.

You are the hero because you never gave up.  Your spirit shouts, "Never die, never give up!"

 

As far as I am concerned, Tthe finishing line is not the destination.

 

Humans should always try to transcend their limits.

 

我没全部改。觉得你应该联系不要写run on sentences. 不要在句子里试着写太多东西。不过,我懂你的意思。不知到如果你了解。对不起,我的中文不太好。

 

http://www.ccc.commnet.edu/sensen/part2/nine/run_ons_correcting.html

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