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stress Nowadays, the stress is a really problem in our societybecause there are more people, young or old, thathave this type of ill. On the one hand, stress is a problem because the person who is affected has symptoms that could hurt its health. Currently, more people in Spain, work a lot of hours in a factory or in the office, and they haven't got enough time to relax. They work ten hours per day, seven days per week, this is too stressful. They could have bad consequences such as bad habits to eat, lots intensives headaches, imsomnia and it could be possible to have a heard attack. On the other hand, children can have stress but not in the same form. Although. I think, it is uncommon.Ther is a casethat i know. I have a friend that her son had stress when he had to study. The boy was extremely nervous when he had to prepare an exam. He must go to the psychologist because he couldn't sleep well at night., even he couldn't beath correctly. Finally, his problem was solved. I totally disagree that stress hasn't got treatment, is not true. In my opinion, you can do diverses things to try it. For instance, every day you could go for a walk into the park alone or with friends an so you could relax an have a good time. Other option you could go to handicrafts class , in this way you could forget all your worries about your job or your family. To conclude, I take life with patience despite the life is indeed stressful.

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Nowadays, the stress is a really problem ( or can say 'really a problem') in our society because there are more people, young and old, that have this type of illness.
On the one hand, stress is a problem because the person who is affected has symptoms that could hurt their health.
Currently, more people in Spain work a lot of hours in a factory or in the office, and they haven't got enough time to relax. They work ten hours per day, seven days per week and this is too stressful. They could suffer bad consequences such as bad eating habits, lots intensives headaches, imsomnia and it could be possible to have a heart attack.


On the other hand, children can have stress but not in the same form. Although, I think it is uncommon. There is a case that i know. I have a friend whose son had stress when he had to study. The boy was extremely nervous when he had to prepare for an exam. He had to see a psychologist because he couldn't sleep well at night and he couldn't even beathe correctly. Finally, his problem was solved.


I totally disagree that there are no treatments for stress; it is not true. In my opinion, you can do diverses things to try it. For instance, every day you could go for a walk to the park alone or with friends and so you could relax an have a good time. For another option, you could go to a handicrafts class and in this way you could forget all your worries about your job or your family.
To conclude, I take life with patience despite the life is indeed stressful.

 

In english, adjectives dont follow the plural of the noun. diverses things should be diverse things

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