A little help, please.

Days ago I found these words and wonder if you could help me by checking if it's well written. Any misspell, omitted commas, anything.
Thank you in advance.

She's a rare breed.
As a matter of fact, she's an endangered species.
Her heart's been broken and, just like mine, it remains in pieces.
But every time we're near each other all we can do is smile.

Our shattered souls intertwine.
I know I've felt the same agonizing pain that she's been through.
I find comfort in her grasp, so I reach out with both arms.