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It's me- ("It's me" is only common to say on the phone, not when writing.)

Hi! My name is June, and I am living in Seoul City, Korea.

I am a product manager in at a CCTV manufacturing company.(period) I develop the new products with my customers and engineers,(comma) and then sells them to my customers. I enjoy my job.

On when weekends, I often go to meet spend time with my friend, eat delicious food and chat all day. or Sometimes I also go to a bookstore and read books.
I am a fan of Alain de Botton, and especially I like his book, Status Anxiety <status Anxiety>.

and also I also love to cook something.(comma) but I am not sure whether it tastes good is tasty or not.

It's me.-

Hi! My name is June, and I live living in Seoul City, Korea.

I am a product manager in a CCTV manufacturing company, I develop the new products with my customers and engineers. and then sells them to my customer. I enjoy my job.

when At weekends, I often go to meet my friend, we eat delicious food and chat all day. or we go to a bookstore and read books.
I am a fan of Alain de Botton, and I  especially I like <Status Anxiety>. and also I love to cook, something. but I am not sure whether it is tasty or not.