A fictional letter

Dear Mrs Bipbip,

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Last week, I lived had the worst experience of my life...
I told to you once about a cruise that I had always wanted to do go on. I was going for a walk with someone who is was next to my cabine, its her name is was Jenna, she was a really nice girl, she said she was went in on a cruise with her fiancé for the first time.
In short, we had intended to prowl around the boat around then when we were about to get out of the boat, when we heard a big, funny noise that nobody could not ignore. 2 minutes later, we realized the boat had sank on the its side. The People then began to panic and to run around, it was terrifying. We had to stick hold onto fixed objects so to we would don't not fall into any holesthe empty space. Jenna still had not seen could not find her fiancé.
This scene became to be hellish: in less than 5 minutes about fifty persons people fell into the holethis empty, I felt sick to my stomach and my head was spinning. The cruise ship gradually collapsed little by little. Jenna and me I were close to a door that leads led to the exterior, we managed to go get out with difficulty and some people could helped us out.
Unluckly Unfortunately, my friend has been informed that she lost her fiancé. We were one of just few of survivors...
I feel so sad when i think about all this.

By hoping you will aswer soon, best regard.

I hope to hear from you soon.

Best Regards,

*Name*

(I have no imagination ^^') - What a depressing story!!!