small Family system

Small Family System

I lived in small family .

I live in a small family.

we have two brothers and sisters along with parents.

I have one brother and one sister along with my parents.

my father is a farmer and also take part in politics.

My father is a farmer and also takes part iin politics.

he afford all the expenses of my study and brother and sister.

He is able to afford all the expenses of my studies as well as my brother's and sister's.

i am doing MBA whil my brother in Final year of DAE as well as my sister in 10th class.

I am doing an MBA while my brother is in his final year of DAE. My sister is in 10th class.

 i have no other source of income except farming.

I have no other source of income but farming.

my father is a hard worker ,all the time he busy in some beneficial activity as well as my also hard worker too in home activity .

My father is a hard worker. He is busy all the time in some beneficial activity. My mother is also a hard worker.

she handle the home activity appropriately.

She handles the home activities appropriately.
so, my parents are very loving to us.

My parents are very loving to us.

I live in a small family. I have one brother and one sister along with my parents. My father is a farmer and also takes part in politics. He is able to afford all the expenses of my studies as well as my brother's and sister's. I am doing an MBA while my brother is in his final year of DAE. My sister is in 10th class. I have no other source of income but farming. My father is a hard worker. He is busy all the time in some beneficial activity. My mother is also a hard worker. She handles the home activities appropriately. My parents are very loving to us.

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