First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hey..I'm very easy going girl love to make friends from all over the world ,love to help people who are interested in Arabic and who wants to visit Egypt and I'm sooo interested in different Cultures, traditions,learning new languages ,wanna see every part in the world and wanna live in an English Country .and don't like people who judge me without get to know me and i don't care about how my friends look or where they are from i only care about who you are inside ...
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hey..I'm a very easy going girl and love to make friends from all over the world. I love to help people who are interested in Arabic and who want to visit Egypt. And I'm sooo interested in different cultures, traditions, learning new languages and want see every part of the world. I want live in an English speaking country and don't like people who judge me without getting to know me first. I also don't care about how my friends look or where they are from. I only care about who you are inside...0
I made some small changes and additions to improve the flow of your introduction; more specifically, your use of conjunctions. I also inserted a bit of punctuation to change those run along sentences into coherent points about your character. Let me know what you think.
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