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The “tricornio”. It was a cloudy winter night, perfect for the mission which consisted on taking some objects from the landscape in order to study them later. The flying saucer remained up among the clouds, out of any possible human sight, and the two members of the crew were teleported down to the desert country road. Immediately they began to walk around, looking for some object worthy enough to be taken to the ship. They took some rocks, a dead little bird, a hedgehog also dead, and a broken car tire. The objects were teleported back to the ship and the two entities went some yards farther to take a water sample from a little pond. It was there where they saw the strange thing resting on the grass, close to the small pond. The strange object seemed to be out of context, as if it shouldn’t be there, however, the extraterrestrial being had the irresistible need of picking it up. He began a careful examination of it, turning it around, wondering what was the purpose of that device. He started an unaware telepathic conversation with his partner who felt a sudden surprise because they were supposed to remain in silent. Then, the one who had the object, as if he was talking to himself, wondered if that object would be a kind of food container, one of these objects where the humans make their physiological needs or an ornamental object perhaps. His partner started to feel nervous and afraid because of such a strange behaviour. The first extraterrestrial felt the need of putting the strange device on his head, as a hat, and immediately he noticed a growing anger feeling. Then he took a piece of branch from the ground and approached to his partner in an violent mood, threatening him by wielding the piece of branch, with such a good luck that he kicked a stone and fell ahead on the muddy grass. The strange object rolled down some yards away and he stood up covered in clay stains all over his body, shaking his head as if he had just awake from some strange dream. Then his partner questioned him about what was going on, and his answer was certainly strange: “I don’t know what that device is, neither what it’s purpose is, but when I was wearing it on my head I felt a terrible urge to take you to the jail and punish you with the piece of branch over and over until you tell me where you come from, your parents name and something about stolen things and drugs…” They left the “tricornio” behind and hurried back to the flying saucer.

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The “tricornio”.

It was a cloudy winters night, perfect for the mission which consisted on taking some objects from the landscape in order to study them later. The flying saucer remained up among the clouds, out of any possible human sight, and the two members of the crew were teleported down to the deserted (significa..."empty of people")country road. Immediately they began to walk around, looking for some object worthy enough to be taken back to the ship. They took some rocks, a dead little dead bird, a hedgehog also dead, and a broken car tire. The objects were teleported back to the ship and the two entities went some yards farther further to take a water sample from a little pond. It was there where that they saw the strange thing resting on the grass, close to the small pond.
The strange object seemed to be out of context, as if it shouldn’t be there, however, the extraterrestrial beings had the irresistible need of picking urge to pick it up. He began a careful examination of it, turning it around, wondering what was the purpose of that device. He started an unaware telepathic conversation with his partner who felt a sudden surprise because they were supposed to remain in silent silence. Then, the one who had the object, as if he was talking to himself, wondered if that object would be a kind of food container, one of these objects where the humans make their physiological needs or an ornamental object perhaps. His partner started to feel nervous and afraid because of such a strange behaviour.
The first extraterrestrial felt the need of putting to put the strange device on his head, as a hat, and immediately he noticed a growing anger feeling of anger. Then he took a piece of branch from the ground and approached to his partner in an violent mood, threatening him by wielding the piece of branch, with such a good bad luck that he kicked a stone and fell ahead on the muddy grass. The strange object rolled down some yards away and he stood up covered in clay stains all over his body, shaking his head as if he had just awaken from some strange dream. Then his partner questioned him about what was going on, and his answer was certainly strange: “I don’t know what that device is, neither what it’s purpose is, but when I was wearing it on my head I felt a terrible urge to take you to the jail and punish you with the piece of branch over and over until you tell me where you come from, your parents names and something about stolen things and drugs…”
They left the “tricornio” behind and hurried back to the flying saucer.

 

 

muy bien, eso estaba un buen leído

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