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May 15th,2014 (If my grammar is wrong, correct for me :> Probably my grammar will be terrible. ) Today was my friend's birthday, so we went to the garden house. I ordered mac-cheese and a peach of beer. It was pretty good time thou. When we came back home, we stopped by grocery store for buying beer. However the clerk told me "Our store doesn't accept your passport" so I couldn't get. :< They wanted to see my ID of California. I'm not American and I don't have drive license thou. How could I show them, huh? I told about that, but they refused. I still don't understand them because last time when i went to other chain, there accepted my passport. It was so terrible to me because I really wanted to drink. :< I gave up and came back home. I still want to drink beer. :< I need beerrrrrrrrr.........:<

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May 15th,2014

(If my grammar is wrong, correct it for me. :> Probably My grammar will probably be terrible. )
Today was my friend's birthday, so we went to the garden house. I ordered mac-cheese and a peach pitcher of beer. It was a pretty good time though. When we came back home, we stopped by a grocery store for buying to buy beer. However, the clerk told me "Our store doesn't accept your passport" so I couldn't get it. :< They wanted to see my ID of Californian ID. I'm not American and I don't have driver's license thou. How could I show them, huh? I told about that, but they refused. I still don't understand them because last time when I went to the other chain [store], they accepted my passport. It was so terrible to for me because I really wanted to drink. :< I gave up and came went back home. I still want to drink beer. :< I need beerrrrrrrrr.........:<

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May 15th,2014

(If my grammar is wrong, correct for me :> Probably my grammar will be terrible. Thank you guys)
Today was my friend's birthday, so we went to the garden house. I ordered mac-cheese and a peach of beer. It was pretty good time thou. When we came back home, we stopped by grocery store for buying beer. However the clerk told me "Our store doesn't accept your passport" so I couldn't get. :< They wanted to see my ID of California. I'm not American and I don't have drive license thou. How could I show them, huh? I told about that, but they refused. I still don't understand them because last time when i went to other chain, there accepted my passport. It was so terrible to me because I really wanted to drink. :< I gave up and came back home. I still want to drink beer. :< I need beerrrrrrrrr.........:<

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