Describe a table ( please help me correct, thank you )

The table describes percentages of home schooled students in SomeCountry in  during the period 1999-2004

The table presents shows the percentage of home-schooled students in Somecountry for the periods from 1999 to 2004. Overall, there was an increasing trend of homes-schooled students in all five categories. Moreover, the percentage of home-schooled students was highest for the kinder-garden category for all the years. The percentage of children at of kinder-garden age who is were schooled at home grew steadily by approximately about one percent each year from 1999 to 2002, then remained the same static during for the year 2003 and increased again by 0.2 percent in 2004. Grade 3-4 also saw a steady  steadily increasing annual increase every year by of 0.1 percent. There is a noticeable fluctuation in the number of home-schooled children at in the grade 1-2 and grade 5-6 categories . The number of grade 1-2 and 5-6 home-schooled students decreased from 1999 to 2001 and then increased again from 2002 to 2004. For grade 7-8, the number was the same for the three years period from 1999 to 2001 at 1.6%, this then increased rapidly from 2002 to 2004. In conclusion  To conclude, it is obvious that there was an increase in the percentage of home-schooled students in Somecountry from 1999 to 2004.

Describe a table ( please help me correct, thankyou )

The table describes the percentages of home-schooled students in SomeCountry in 1999-2004

The table presents the percentage of home-schooled students in SomeCountry (for the period) from 1999 to 2004. Overall, there was an increasing trend of homes-schooled students in all five categories. Moreover, the percentage of home-schooled students was highest for the kinder-garden category for each year all the years. The percentage of children at kindergarden age who are schooled at home grew steadily by about one 0.1 percent each year from 1999 to 2002, then remained the same for the year 2003 and increased by 0.2 percent in 2004. Grade 3-4 also saw a steady increase every year of 0.1 percent. There is a noticeable fluctuation in the number of home-schooled children in grade 1-2 and grade 5-6. The number of grade 1-2 and 5-6 home-schooled students decreased from 1999 to 2001 and then increased again from 2002 to 2004. For grade 7-8, the percentage was the same for the three-years period from 1999 to 2001 at 1.6%, and then increased rapidly from 2002 to 2004. To conclude, it is evident (from examination of the data) that there was an increase in the percentage of home-schooled students (over all grade levels) in SomeCountry from 1999 to 2004.

Good job!. Note: if the numbers in the table are percentages, then a change of 0.1 is 'a tenth of a percent' not one percent. Again, well done.