Corrections · 8
American English Corrections
Marriage
I have been married for six years. I love my husband and my family. We have a beautiful and cute kid. She is four years and ten months old. Because In order to take care of my family If you say "because of my family" in the context of being a mother, people will be able to figure out what you mean but you really should say "In order to take care of my family" or "In order to raise my children" or something like that because it is more natural sounding., I quited quit The past tense form of quit is "quit", not "quited" and not "quitted". It is an irregular verb. my last job; I was an primary English primary teacher It should be "an English primary teacher", not "a English primary teacher". An goes before words that begin with vowels or words that begin with a consonant that sounds like a vowel; for instance an XML file because you pronounce XML as "EX EM EL". , which is the 'iron rice bowl' a dream job in China. Sorry, I don't know what you mean by 'iron rice bowl' job so I changed it to 'dream job'. A dream job is a job that everyone would LOVE to have. I hope that is what you meant.I passed the exam to for the job and typically, you will not would never have to worry you will lose the about losing this particular job someday, except that if you were to make extremely big bad mistakes or if you quit the job by yourself on your own. Every year, there are many people who have the qualifications that spend money and energy to attend on taking the exam and trying to pass it.
Is there anyone else out there that feels that like you they and your their husband or wife have no topics nothing in common? And you Anyone else out there who has found that you they haven't talked or "spoken" to each other for so long and who feels like time. He or she their spouse Try to avoid "he or she" and "his or her". A lot of Americans say it but a better way is to use the pronoun "their" instead. For instance, instead of saying "Any student who has lost his or her book should buy another one on half.com", say "Any student who has lost their book should buy another one on half.com". "Their" is a dummy pronoun here which is used to avoid the confusion over whether the person it refers to is male or female. :) always plays on the computer, on their cellpone, or on their ipad? There are is a lot of silence instead of talking. We did and we still do.
I think it's an art to run maintain a marriage or "to keep a marriage alive". And both of us need to learn how to run do it.
Marriage
I have been married for six years. I love my husband and my family. We have a beautiful and cute daughter, who is four years and ten months old. But because of my family, I had to quit my last job, I was a English primary teacher, which is known as the 'iron rice bowl' job in China(I passed the exam for the job). This is better known as a job for life, unless you make a big mistake or quit.
Every year many people who have the right qualifications, spend extra money and energy attempting to pass this exam.
Is there anybody that feels that they and their husband or wife have no topics in common? have you found that you haven't talked to each other for along time? Or that your husband or wife always plays on their computer, cellpone or ipad? Do you find that there is a lot of silence instead of talking? We both found this and still do.
I think it's an art to run a marriage. And both of us need to learn how to run it.
Marriage
I have married for six years. I love my husband and my family. We have a beautiful and cute kid. She is four years and ten months.Because of my family, I quitted my last job, a primary English teacher,which is the 'iron rice bowl' job in China(I passed the exam to the job)and you will not worry you will lose the job someday., except that you make big mistakes or you quit the job by yourself.Every year there are many people who have the qualifications spend money and energe to attend the exam and try to pass it.
Is there anybody feel that you and your husband or wife have no topics in common? And you found that you haven't talk to each other for long time. He or she always play computer or cellpone or ipad. There are a lot of silence instead of talking.We did and do
I think it's an art to run marriage. And both of us need to learn how to run it.
All the best...
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