please correct my essay.
Some people think that true love exists inly in books and films.
Some people are in favour of idea that true love meets only in the art.
I do not agree with people who think so. their Their opinion like on the quotation , which say:"When proverty comes in through the door, love flies out the window". it can not be true love. In my opinion some people can think so, because they disappointed in love , and did not meet their soulmate.
But most of people believe in love . Actually, life proves it by many examples. There are a lot of people who fought for their love.I think that love is the most beautiful feeling, that you can not express by words, you can only feel it.
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please correct my essay.
Some people think that true love exists only in books and films.
Some people are in favour of idea that true love is present only in art/the arts.
I do not agree with these people who think so. their Their opinion like on is expressed by the quotation , which says, "When proverty comes in through the door, love flies out the window." That cannot be true love. In my opinion some people can think so because they are disappointed in love , and have not meet their soulmate.
But most of people believe in love. Actually, life proves love exists through by many examples. There are a lot of people who fight for their love. I think that love is the most beautiful feeling. that You cannot express it by words, you can only feel it.
Really nice entry.
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