Stressful life
My father in law has a big problem. He lives a stressful life. I want to help making a new plan with tips for him. Planning will have three important paragraphs: Diet, exercise routines and working hours.
Diet is very important in our lifes. If you think that your are fat, first of all, you should eat healthy food five times to day.
Next step is to do exercise three times to week. For example running or cycling. Sport is better in the morning than after the work.
Finally, my father in law should arrive early to home. Actually he works eleven hours at day. Changing to get up a bit later and working eight hours at day, he would fell much better.
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Stressful life
My father-in-law has a big problem. He lives a stressful life. I want to help him make making a new plan with tips for him. The plan Planning will have three important parts/pieces paragraphs: diet, exercise routines and working hours (working less).
Diet is very important in our lives lifes. If you think that your are fat, first of all, you should eat healthy food five times a to day.
The next step is to do exercise three times a to week, for example running or cycling. It Sport is better to exercise in the morning than after the work.
Finally, my father-in-law should come home earlier from work arrive early to home. Actually Right now/currently, he works eleven hours a at day. He would feel much better getting Changing to get up a bit later and working just eight hours at day., he would fell much better.
Good work- actual is a 'false friend' in Spanish and English, so be careful there!
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