Working With a Group or Working Alone

Work is an important part of our life lives, because it takes almost half of our the day and effects the other parts of our life lives. Some people believe that working independently is better, while there are others who prefer to work in a group. As far as I am concerned, person people should work within a team for two important reasons.

The main reason is that you can learn new things from other group members. There are lots of learning styles, but I think the most effective learning is to learn from others. For example, when I was studying at the university, my professor construct organized the students into a group. We were working as on a project. One engineering student, one chemistry student, one doctoral student, and me as ana economics student. Our professor was a law professor, so with 4 different areas of expertise, and an additional area with a law professor, we successfully finished our project.

This project was about public investment in health areas and its benefits to society. This project was changed my all entire career. Before this project, I didn't a have a vision. İ thought that I would finish my school, then I would work as an economist in a small bank, but I leanrned many things from my partners. I especially learned from my friend who was a doctor; he was is an intelligent man. We shared our knowledges. İ learned many things from him and he learned economics from me. Also, my law professor was a key person in the project. He had worked on many projects before ours projects. Thus, he had a great expertise in this area.

Now my doctor friend and I have own a hospital, which is the biggest private hospital in the our city. This experience taught me that working with a smart group is a big chance can create big opportunities for a one person.

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