Harry potter
《Harry potter》is my favorite movie.l've already watch seven movie four times.Despite all that,l still contine to watch movie again.l appreciate harry potter that have the sense of reponsibility and courage.l admire that he has two graetest friend in the world ,they will give all they could do to help and love potter.l think lt isn't feel regret to have ture friend.from 1 to 7,he is litte boy at the biginning into a mature man .He killed voldemort to save life of everyone,and bring the peace.（Can you correct and polish my test,thank you )
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Harry potter
《Harry potter》is my favorite movie.l've already watched seven movies four times.Despite all that,l still contine to watch the movies again.l appreciate that harry potter has a sense of reponsibility and courage.l admire that he has two greatest friends in the world ,they will give all they could do to help and love potter.l think he does't feel regret to have a true friend.from 1 to 7,he is a little boy at the beginning into a mature man .He killed voldemort to save everyone's life,and bring peace.（Can you correct and polish my test,thank you )
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