I went with My husband and I went to the beach last weekend. We live near the beach and we usually go often all throughout the year, but I prefer go to the beach in the Spring. because the sun not very I prefer the beach during springtime because of the mild weather and the lack of crowds. hot and there aren't many people There is only a one inconvenience at the beach in springtime: the water is cold. Last weekend at the the beach the weather was very windy, and more we enjoyed watching the many people was playing kitesurf windsurfing. The landscape was spectacular, all and the sky was full of comets kites. 
 Esto suena muy bien, Jennifer. Usted es capaz de mostrar al lectoren vez de simplemente decirle al lector cómo era la playa. Creo que compraria una cometa para volar en la playa este verano!

The Beach (we capitalize word titles in English...)

I went with my husband to the beach last weekend. We live near the beach and we usually go often (usually OR often - both are redundant) all year, but I prefer to go to the beach in Spring because the sun is not very hot and there aren't many people. There is only one inconvenience... the water is cold ;-)

Last weekend was very windy and a lot of people were kitesurfing. The landscape was spectacular and the sky full of kites(? - comets are flying objects in outer space.  Do you mean the toy that kids play with?) comets.

Well done!! :)