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The end of holydays Tomorrow I will be back to my college. Last week It was eastern holidays, and now I going back to study and sit some final exams. During my holidays I went to know the city center with my wife, It was really great because we went cycling so we did exercise as well. While we were having a ride through the city I was paying attention to bicycle shops to find a new one. At the moment I am using one of a friend but it is a bit damaged and has some problems in the chains and brakes. Well talking about university, I really like it because it is very modern. The library is 24 hours open, in this way I can study without time limitation. But I not everything is studying, I want to have some time to do some sports because everybody body need to keep healthy, at the end we need to enjoy our life. Thank you for correcting this mess.

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The end of holydays

Tomorrow I will be back to my college. Last week It was eastern holidays, and now I going back to study and sit for some final exams. During my holidays, I went to know the city center with my wife. It was really great because we went cycling so and we did some exercise as well. While we were having a ride through the city, I was paying attention to one of the bicycle shops to find a new one. At the moment, I am using one of a my friend bicycle but it is a bit damaged and has some problems in the with the chains and brakes.

Well talking about university, I really like it because it is very modern. The library is 24 hours open, in this way I can study without time limitation. But I not everything is studying, I want to have some time to do some sports because everybody everyone's body need to keep healthy, at the end we need to enjoy our life.

Thank you for correcting this mess.

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The end of holydays

Tomorrow I will be back at my college. Last week It was easter holidays, and now I'm going back to study and sit some final exams. During my holidays I went to the city center with my wife, It was really great because we went cycling so we did exercise as well. While we were riding through the city I was paying attention to bicycle shops to find a new one. At the moment I am using one of a friend but it is a bit damaged and has some problems with the chains and brakes.

Well, talking about university, I really like it because it is very modern. The library is open 24 hours, in this way I can study without time limitation. But not everything is about studying, I want to have some time to do some sports because everybody body needs to keep healthy, at the end of the day we need to enjoy our life.

Thank you for correcting this mess.

 

Good work Carlos. It wasn't a mess at all!

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The end of holydays

Tomorrow I will be back to my college. Last week it was eastern holidays, and now I going back to study and sit for some final exams. During my holidays I went to know the city center with my wife. It was really great because we went cycling so and we did exercise as well. While we were having a ride through the city I was paying attention to bicycle shops to find a new one. At the moment I am using one of a friend's but it is a bit damaged and has some problems in with the chains and brakes.

Well Talking about my university, I really like it because it is very modern. The library is open 24 hours open, in this way so I can study without time limitation. But I not everything is studying, I want to have some time to do some sports because everybody body needs to keep healthy. At the end we need to enjoy our life.

Thank you for correcting this mess.

 

It's not a mess at all. Nicely written!

Buen trabajo!

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