Travel diary

Yesterday was my holiday, so that I went to climb on a mountain hike with my friend, ,and my friend's teacher, and my friend's younger classmates. That is Kanlong natural protected area.The mountain air is very fresh. It Let leaves a person in a jovial mood. We started from at 8 o 'clock in the morning. We just went down the mountain when it was 5 o 'clock in the afternoon. I had a very happy day yesterday, but my legs is are very sore.

*Notes: first, great job and effort!

1) mountain climbing: extreme sport

   -look on the Internet for the difference between a hike on a mountain and mountain climbing

2) after a sentence in writing, you put the punctuation (. , ? !) and then a space. See.