Rome :))

My journey to Rome was amazing. I did not (or didn't sounds less formal) know nothing for anything about this country and so before to go leaving I was looking for information about it/ I looked up some information about the area. I think that is it was one of my favourite travels trips/holidays because each (or every) day was extraordinary.
The day of the travel  we left, we should had to be at school at three o'clock in the morning so I needed to (or had to) wake up at two. o'clock I could not (couldn't) sleep and I was really exhausted when the travel finished the journey was over/we arrived because during it I did not sleep too I didn't sleep during the journey either.
When we arrived to at the hotel we left the luggage in the rooms and then we got out to a restaurant to eat. I ate pizza in a restaurant near the hotel because my friends were hungry so we choosed chose the nearest restaurant.
That day we went to the church of Santa María Maggiore, that was the first place, which we visited.

You could say here: 'The first place we visited was the church of Santa María Maggiore (on the day we arrived.)'

The places that I have loved to visit was The places (that) I loved visiting (the most) were/Of all the places we visited, the ones I loved most were the Fontana di Trevi, the Coliseum and the Vatican. but Though, in the Vatican I got lost for fifteen minutes because my friend Alba was taking pictures and the rest wanted to visit the high top of the dome but we did not have time. I went to say it to tell Alba but I got lost her and when I looked to find my friends they were gone. Ultimately (Eventually - sounds more natural) I found Alba and we both search searched/looked for the rest.
We walked to all the places that we visited and I admit that (for me) that was killing it was really tough/it almost killed me because I am not accustomed to (or used to) walking so much. and those days was one of the times in which I have walked almost the day, but it was worth. It was one of the few times I have walked for almost the entire day but it was worth it.
I enjoyed it so much. The places I visited are absolutely gorgeous and to be there with my friends all was fantastic. I am going to remember this travel trip/holiday/journey because I have good regards? for it. it was one of the best I have ever had/I had such good times in Rome.

Sounds like an amazing trip!

My journey to Rome was amazing, I did not know nothing for anything about this country and so before to go I was looking for (I went i looked up) information about it. I think that is one of my favourite travels because each day was extraordinary.
(On) the day of the travel, we should be at school at three o'clock so I needed to wake up at two o'clock. I could not sleep and I was really exhausted when the travel finished because during it I did not sleep too.
When we arrived to at the hotel we left the luggage in the rooms and then we got out went to a restaurant to eat. I ate pizza in a restaurant near the hotel because my friends were hungry so we choosed chose the nearest restaurant.
That day we went to the church Santa María Maggiore. That was the first place, which we visited.
The places (we went to/we visited) that I have loved to visit was the Fontana di Trevi, the Coliseum and the Vatican, but in the last place, I got lost in for fifteen minutes, because my friend Alba was taking pictures and the rest wanted to visit the high of the dome but we did not have time, I went to say it to tell Alba but I got lost her (on the way) and when I looked to for my friends they were gone. Ultimately I found Alba and we both search the rest (looked for the others).
We walked to all the places that we visited and I (have to) admit that for me, that was killing because I am not accustomed to walking so much and those days was one of the times in which I have walked almost the whole day, but it was worth it.
I enjoyed (my trip/ it ) so much, the places I visited are were absolutely gorgeous and with my friends, all was fantastic, I am going to remember this travel because I have good regards for it (I had a wonderful experience).

:)