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Challenge It's been a long time since I wrote a notebook entry last time. I have been busy these days to get used to my new job, but I'm enjoying learning new things and make a new relationship with my coworkers. Now, I decided to get another qualification to improve my skill in work. I'm going to have an examination next year, and I have to write 20 reports in about 5 months to take an exam. That would be a hard work for me. To keep working while raising child is difficult, but I want to try it. I like my job, and of cause I love my family! I'll enjoy my challenge.

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It's been a long time since I wrote a notebook entry last time.
I have been busy these days to get getting used to my new job, but I'm enjoying learning new things and make a making new relationships with my coworkers.

Now, I decided to get another qualification to improve my skill in work. I'm going to have an examination next year, and I have to write 20 reports in about 5 months to take an exam. That would be a hard work for me.

To keep working while raising child is difficult, but I want to try it. I like my job, and of cause course I love my family! I'll enjoy my challenge.

 

Hi Marie,

Here are some notes on the corrections:

"last time" - I took that out of the end of the sentence because it was not needed. Since you already said it has beeng a long time, it's implied that you are reffering to the last time you made an entry.

 

"to get" - I would use "getting" here instead since it's something you are continually doing.

 

"make a new relationship" - Since "coworkers" is plural, it sounds more correct to use the plural form "relationships" too. I also changed "make" to "making" since you're describing something you continually do (like "getting").

 

"cause" - Just a small misspelling - plenty of native speakers make little mistakes like this too :)

 

I'm sure it is hard working and raising a child. Your English learning seems to be going very well though. I wish you the best in your new job and with your family!

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