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One busy day how was a busy day! i had to renew all of products from 10 a:m to 5 p:m. i felt very tired and headache. then i had dinner and used a drinks which i love and after that i fell sleep around 45 minutes. so all of tired was disappeared. what was be comportable!

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One busy day

hHow was abusy a day it was! i I had to renew all of the products from 10 a:m to 5 p:m.* (?)
i I felt very tired and I had a headache. tThen i I had dinner and used I had a drinks which i love and after that, i I fell asleep around 45 minutes later. sSo, all of the tiredness was had disappeared. wWhat was needed was to be comportable comfortable!

 

*Generally speaking, physical products are not something "renewed", but I don't understand the intent of this sentence, so I can't correct it.

 

- The first letter of the word in every sentence needs to be capitalized. Otherwise, it reads as though you are texting.

- "I" (personal pronoun) is always capitalized.

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