Poor Battery
My first article here. Now, I'm staring at the screen and my laptop is running out of battery. It has been with me for 2 years and now the battery is getting worse. It was able to work without power connectiong for a long time. Today is the last day of November. December is coming, and I'm hoping for snow here in Shanghai. Well, maybe it will arrive this hustle city in January. Late is better than none，isn't it?
Oh, this picture has nothing to do with what I'm talking about. Yet do you like this cute decoration?
I have this article pretty short. Would anyone modify it for me? Many thanks~
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Poor Battery
My first article here. Now, I'm staring at the screen and my laptop battery is running out
Oh, this picture has nothing to do with what I'm talking about. Yet do you like this cute decoration?
I have kept this article pretty short. Would anyone modify it for me? Many thanks~
It's snowing in London today ;) Very unusual for November.
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Poor Battery
My first article here. Now, I'm staring at the screen and my laptop is running out of battery. It has been with me for 2 years and now the battery is getting worse. It was able to work without power connection for a long time. Today is the last day of November. December is coming, and I'm hoping for snow here in Shanghai. Well, maybe it will arrive this hustle city in January. Late is better than none，isn't it?Oh, this picture has nothing to do with what I'm talking about. Yet do you like this cute decoration?
I have this article pretty short. Would anyone modify it for me? Many thanks~
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