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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am an ordinary girl.Now i am studying in a university in suzhou which is a beautiful city in south China. The most famous attractions here are the classical gardens.It's a pity that i haven't visited there.I like reading love stories especially ancient romantic stories.Sometimes i prefer to be alone ,but it doesn't mean i am lonely.I like to chat with my friends ,almost with everything.What's more, listening to music and doing some exercise are my favourites. Recently i am busy on hurting jobs.It's a lengthy process and i am a little depressed.My english is so poor that i hope i can achieve good pronounciation and perfect oral through learning .

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am an ordinary girl. At the moment I am studying at university in suzhou which is a beautiful city in south China. The most famous attractions here are the classical gardens. It's a pity that I haven't visited (been would probably be a better word choice) there.I like reading love stories, especially ancient romantic stories ones.Sometimes I prefer to be alone, but it doesn't mean I am lonely. I like to chat with my friends about almost with everything. What's moreIn addition, listening to music and doing some exercise are my favourite hobbies. Recently I am have been busy on hunting jobs.It's a lengthy process and I am a little depressed.My english is so poor that I only hope I can achieve good pronounciation and perfect oral through learning .

Note: Your grammar is really good :)
Remember to capitalize the word "I" at any part in the sentence!
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Sorry, this "At the moment I am studying at university in suzhou which is a beautiful city in south China" should have been "At the moment, I am studying at a university in suzhou, which is a beautiful city in south China"

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