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I will be more stronger In my childhood time,I have no doubt to believe that I will be rich 20 years later.I don't know where that confident come from,That rich means I have a big house(like in the American film single-family villa),30 minutes away from the center city;when I go to the supermarket or shopping malls I don't need to see the price of goods,just take it away and pay for it straightly,do you find it funny,I think it is a desire for a child and I am still struggling for it,but time approaching gradually,am I need to speed up?

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I will be Stronger ( use either "more strong" or "stronger", not both together)

Since my childhood, I have had a dream to be rich twenty years later. I don't know from where that confidence (confidence = noun; confident = adjective) comes. To me, being "rich" means that I will have a big house, like a single-family detached home seen in the American films, located thirty minutes away from the city centre. When I go shopping at the supermarket or mall, I will not need to check the price of goods, just pick up the items and pay for them immediately. Do you find this dream strange? I think it is a childish dream, but I am still working towards it. As time passes......(not sure exactly what you mean here) do I need to mature/ do I need to work harder to achieve the dream? 

 

Just remember that money truly does not buy happiness....although it certainly can help! The North American dream comes at a cost......concentrate on your education and work hard to achieve your goals! 

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I will be more stronger

In During my childhood time,I have no doubt to believed that I will would be rich in 20 years time later.I don't know where that confident confidence come came from., Being that rich would means I would have a big house (like in the American film Single-Family) villa),30 minutes away from the city  center. city;I would not be concerned with the price of goods in the shopping malls, I would just pay for them without a second thought.when I go to the supermarket or shopping malls I don't need to see the price of goods,  just take it away and pay for it straightly,  Do you find it this funny?, I think it is every childs' desire/dream a desire for a child and I am still struggling to achieve for it.   but The time however, is approaching gradually.,(am I need to speed up? I am not sure what you are trying to say in this last part.)

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抱歉说话太急。因为我生气。我快毕业了也快当房奴了(我父亲为房子奋斗了一生)。在我的城市天津,满足你说的条件的公寓(attention: department, not house)的售价是6 500 000 人民币.谈什么奋斗,简直是被政府榨干了血液。
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u wanna have a american big house in this shit country? forget about it unless your have a father named Ligang. u just make your life hopless and wasting time.

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