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Coldplay - Magic I decided to write a notebook entry in English, because I don't practice English much lately, so the idea of losing my English skills -which are already pretty poor- is kinda scaring me right now. Since I focused on French and Japanese learning, my brain turned into a language soup which doesn't taste good at all. The hardest part of writing a notebook entry is finding a topic. So I decided to mention my old friend Coldplay. I was listening and loving Coldplay songs in the times when I was listening music:) I am not quite sure about what has happened but somehow I stopped listening to music. I mean I lost my interest in music totally. I have some guesses about the reason why but that kind of topic might sound too deep for a lame notebook entry :) I was writing about Coldplay, right?:) I heard Coldplay's new song Magic on the radio while I was driving in the hot afternoon. It was like a real magic. I liked the song instantly, not because the song was awesome but because it was like meeting with an old friend after a long time:) After watching the video clip of the song I started to like it even more. The end :) Thanks for corrections in advance:)

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Coldplay - Magic

I decided to write a notebook entry in English, because I haven't practiced English much lately, so the idea of losing my English skills -which are already pretty poor- is kinda scaring me right now. Since I focused on French and Japanese learning, my brain turned into a language soup which doesn't taste good at all.

The hardest part of writing a notebook entry is finding a topic. So I decided to mention my old friend Coldplay. I was listening and loving Coldplay songs in the times when I was listening to music:) I am not quite sure about what has happened but somehow I stopped listening to music. I mean I lost my interest in music totally. I have some guesses about the reason why but that kind of topic might sound too deep for a lame notebook entry :)

I was writing about Coldplay, right?:) I heard Coldplay's new song Magic on the radio while I was driving in the hot afternoon. It was like a real magic. I liked the song instantly, not because the song was awesome but because it was like meeting with an old friend after a long time:) After watching the video clip of the song I started to like it even more. The end :)

Thanks for corrections in advance:)

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This is great writing with few corrections needed:

 

practice - noun

to practise - verb

 

when I was listening to music

It was like real magic - don't need the article "a" here

 

I love Coldplay, too, and I can't wait for the new cd to be released on May 19th! I agree that while the new song is enjoyable, it lacks Coldplay's earlier brilliance.

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