I want to go to South Korea again in this year.

A few days ago, i watched a television drama about a family story in Gyeongju and saw many Beautiful scenes. It reminds me of memories about Gyeongju. It was when I traveled there, I was very happy。 

This place was very beautiful. i went to this city in October 2011。At that time，The weather was good. i and my friend who is a nice girl planed to travel this old city by ourselves. But we met some troubles. We got lost..... 

We were very tired, and we couldn't see anybody in this small place. 

We were waiting for an hour but we just saw 2 cars. we tried to hitch-hike。they wanted to help us,but those cars were full. 

Until an hour later, we finally met an empty car to pick us up.

I want go to South Korea again in this year.

A few days ago， I was watched a television drama about that a family story in Gyeongju.And i saw many Beautiful scenerys via this television drama.It's let me thank It conjured up of some  many happy memories of In gyeongju journey was very happy。
This places were very beautiful ,I went to this city in October 2011.At that time,The weather was fine.i and my friend,a nice girl A nice girl, my friend and I, all three of us planned to travel around this old city by ourselves.But we met some troubles during that day--we got lost..... 

We were very tired, In particular,We couldn't see anybody in this small places.
We were waiting for an hour,and after a while we saw 2 cars.we tried to hitch-hike.They wanted to help us,but these cars were all taken .
About the an hour later,we finally met an empty car to pick up us .

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1. a few days ago..I was watched>watched是动词过去时,而was是助动词, be助动词和主动词构成进行体, 但是从您的句子而言, 您并没有写成进行体形式, 所以要么改成I was watching, 要么写成 I watched..个人认为I watched 更好

2. 格式问题, 英文的句号不是"。", 而是".", 一个点, 这个是italki..错误无利害关系, 但是如果您要写一份正式文稿, 不能忽略标点以及格式的问题; 正式文书, 单数第一人称只能大写-->I

3.conjure up memories of>勾起回忆; It's let me thank of, it's 不可以跟let等主动词搭配..thank是谢谢的意思

4.places> 名词的复数形式, 后面的be动词要用复数, 这是所谓的语法一致[grammatical concord], 所以places对应的be动词是-are, 但是由于您是在叙述一件过去的事情, 应该用过去时>were

5.We are very tired，In particular,We can't see>整篇文章的动词时-体-态应该保持一致, 适当的时候可以不一致.

6.meet是强变化动词[不规则动词],古英语的遗留现象, 并不是以-ed结尾, 而是要发生音变>meet--met--met

7.1=one..一般会用an hour, 而不是one hour..当然也要看情况来说...很多东西不是一尘不变的

8.pick up不是搭载某人..而是拾起, 学会之意