About my country, Korea.

the city where I live is Busan, Korea. it's a southern harbor city, and second famous city in Korea.
usually, foreigners know Seoul city the most, but I prefer my city.
I think, Seoul is too complicated, and crowded. my ex girlfriend lives in the city.
so I used to live in Seoul for a few month, also I've been visiting there, because of the friends.
Seoul is a capital city. so many friends of mine live in there.
certainly Seoul is an interesting city though, people who live in there are lonely.
loneliness in crowded, I mean. (but these are just my own opinion and feeling.)

but Busan is a dynamic city. there are also many kind people.
our accents, and expressions are quite different from Seoul's. it sounds more wild.
so foreign students who study Korean could be confused easily.
for example, it's a kind like the difference between Scottish's and American's.

Korean territory is not that big, but each local states have their own vivid accent, and culture. it's amazing, isn't it?
sometimes it feels sad to see the people struggle to work for living in this small country.
that's why I like to travel to foreign countries.
I can't see the horizon in my country. when I saw the horizon in Cambodia at the first in my life, it was very impressive to me. it was weird, but also touching feeling.

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About my country, Korea.

The city where I live is Busan, Korea. It’s a southern harbor city, and the second most famous city in Korea. Usually foreigners know of Seoul the most, but I prefer my city.

I think Seoul is too complicated and crowded. My ex-girlfriend lives in the city.

So I used to live in Seoul for a few months, also I’ve been visiting there, because of my friends. (I lived in Seoul for a few months, and I've been visiting my friends who live there.)

Seoul is the capital city, so many friends of mine live in there.

Seoul is certainly an interesting city, though people who live in there are lonely. Loneliness within a crowd, I mean. (but these are just my own opinions and feelings.)

But Busan is a dynamic city. (Busan, however, is a dynamic city.) There are also many kind people.

Our accents and expressions are quite different from Seoul’s. It sounds more wild.

Therefore foreign students who study Korean could be confused easily.

For example, it’s similar to the difference between Scottish and American accents.

Korean territory is not that big, but each of the local states have their own vivid accent, and culture. It’s amazing, isn’t it?

Sometimes I feel sad to see the people struggle to work for a living in this small country.

That’s why I like to travel to foreign countries. I can’t see the horizon in my country. When I saw the horizon in Cambodia for the first time in my life, it was very impressive to me. It was weird, but somewhat touching feeling.