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I wanted to leave the city as soon as possible. It was horrible. That The story ocurred in the last summer, . In in July, when I finished my degree. My friends invited me to a party in at Gabriela's house. My friends were happy because I passed all the exams.There was a problem, Gabriela was is  my ex-girlfriend. She had much has a lot of money and her house was huge.
was: is used for past tense like "I was going to leave, but I stayed. Is: is present, in this form meaning she still is your ex-girlfriend.
I went to the party. In the party I met a girl called named Laura. Laura was beautiful! She lived in Córdoba, but she studied in Sevilla, in my city. She had long hair, and tanned skin. I felt fell in love her. When I was talking with Laura, Gabriela arrived, and she said told her: Do Did you meet Alberto? He is my ex-boyfriend, be careful..." and she went left. It was an embarrassing situation, but Laura said me: "Don't worry, she is angry".

Laura was my perfect girl. She finished her degree too. So, in August, she went to live in Córdoba.I have never been in Córdoba and I have never haven't seen her since July. So, I wanted to leave my city as soon as possible!!
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Hello Mikel,

It is true, I have made some changes to my room. For example, my bed isn't at window below the window . Now my bed is next to my old armchair. I said told you I didn't like my old armchair, but my mother didn't want to buy a new armchair. My sister doesn't like my new room, and she doesn't agree with me. She wanted my old armchair for her room. I have changed my green carpet, now I have a new pink carpet in the middle of my room.

I have two new pieces of furnitures. I bought a new little lamp and a new table. But I liked my old table because I had it since I was child. I bought its at Ikea. Do you want to see a photo of my room? I will send in my next letter.

Write soon,

Alberto
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Hello friends,

Thank you for your present. I like it and I wear in on my hand. It is a fantastic ring. I like it because I love rings and this one has a little sentence about you. I am going to return a photo with my pets. I will sign it. I will send you a surprise too!
Liked: you use to like the ring, but when you say I like it- your saying you still do.

When you say "In my hand" you are holding it, but your wearing it so it will be "on my hand"

Write soon,

Alberto.
4- Your getting better!! Keep up the good work, pay attention to your past-tense and present wording though! 
[[Please if you correct me, you can to mark me a note each letter, between 1(bad)-5(excellent)? Thank you!!]]