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Nowadays it is common that in order to sell more goods,companies pay more attention to advertisement.some people are attracted by the power of advertising,they neglect whether the goods are of real need.they believe that the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising.to the converstry,i hold the idea that the higher the goods sell,the more real need is reflected .
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Nowadays it is common that in order to sell more goods, companies pay more attention to advertisement (Could also say 'place more emphasis on advertising'). Some people are so attracted by the power of advertising, they neglect to think whether they need the goods/products or not. They believe that the high sales of popular consumer goods reflects the power of advertising. On the contrary, i hold the idea that the more the goods sell, the more real need is reflected.
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