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Cats (1)
I'm going to write some articles or stories or whatever they are supposed to be called, and I'm going to need help with corrections and especially if there is a way to say something better than how it was written. So, any help would be appreciated. Thank you.
He grew up in a big city in a crowded neighborhood, his family didn't have any cats as pets, so cats were mostly these unknown creatures, which you only see them when they are moving cautiously around the streets, gathering around dumpsters; feeding and fighting, or jumping suddenly in front of you in a dark alley. So, in general he didn't have any feelings toward cats, except for two incidents from that period which he remembers very well.
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Good job! I think it might help to have shorter sentences in order to be understood easier
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