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Mistakes make me improve my English.
I'm so glad to have a very so many kind friends here. I can say I found the right way to learn English. At first I used to feel diffident be diffidence when I was writing something in English, but now I'm a little better. I believe if I want to learn English I have to be more sociable and willing to practice writing and speaking to people. to out going of writing and speaking.and. I may will have some an awkward moments but I don't mind. I have to trust myself.
Dear friends , thank you for correcting !! :)
Mistakes make me improve my English.
I'm so glad to have a very kind friends here, I can say I found the right way to learn English, at first I used to be diffident when I was writing something in English, but now I'm a little better. I believe if I want to learn English I have to be outgoing un-selfconscious about* writing and speaking and I will have an awkward moments but I don't mind. I have to trust myself .
Dear friends, thank you for correcting !! :)
* I wasn't sure the right word to use there. Outgoing meant you were friendly and sociable, but I thought you also wanted to say that you had to be brave about speaking/writing even if you made mistakes. So I used "un-selfconscious" to mean you don't think about how you look to others. I hope that helps--the English was very good!
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