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I think that the technology world has changed the lives and the human behaviour. The internet allows people/me/you/us to connect with anywhere part of the world and with anyone no matter how far away you are, it's/ it is also changing also the way people/I/we communicate.
Everyone who has a computer can to access to the internet, and   visiting and registering with any website - websites such as Facebook, twitter...I personally use internet especially for learning, looking for websites that may be interesting for me, and to socialise with people through emails, social network, forums and blogs and also to check emails. I think that it is a good place to share things, advertise, protest and generally make or maintain contact with other persons/'persons' is correct but 'people' is used more often.
Internet also allows people/me/you/us to download files and movies; however, you should have take care if you don´t know the website because you can get a virus in your computer/your computer could get a virus. Besides If you are in a public place such as an airport or coffee shop...you may be able to connect to a wi-fi and browse without having/needing to pay for this service.
On the other hand, Internet is revolutionizing the world of business, creating new ways to make reach customers. However it is affecting lots of small businesses that have closed because of online shopping, for example.
Another aspect to consider is that the internet can be a danger for children if their parents don´t control the access to the web pages they visit. So I think that parents have to tell their children not to visit certain pages and block them if necessary, to help them to be responsible.

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I think that the World of technology world hasve changed the our lives life and the human our behaviour. The Internet allows you to connect with to anywhere in part of the world and with anyone, no matter how far away you are,; it is also changing also the way of we communicate.
Everyone who has a computer can to access to the internet and visiting any website and register in on websites such as Facebook, or twitter...I personally use the internet especially for learning, looking for website that may be interesting tofor me, and to socialise with people through emails, social networks, forums, and blogs and also to check emails. I think that it is a good place to share things, advertise, protest and generally make or maintain contact with others persons.
The Internet also allows you to download files and movies, however you should havetake care if you don´t Know the website because you can get a virus inon your computer. Besides if you are in a public place, such as an airport,  or coffee shop...you may be able to connect to a their wi-fi and browse without having to pay for this service.
On the other hand, the Internet is revolutionizing the world of business,  by creating new ways to make customers, and to buy and sell. However, it is affecting lots of small business that have closed because of online shopping, for example.
OtherAnother aspect to consider is that the internet can be a danger for children if their parents don´t control their to access to web pages they do. So that, I think that parents have to tell their children not to visit certain pages and block them if necessary and help them to be responsible.