Entry 4

Hello, friends!

I start work soon. I want it to be Thursday. I will work in the spa in a hotel. My customers are from the United Kingdom or Germany. I will be able to practice my English with them. It will be fun, and I hope I do well. I will do treatments, manicures, pedicures, massages and more. In the spa is impossible not to relax. And I work here. I will go relax all day.

Good job! It sounds like a fun job.

Entry 4

Hello, friends!

I start work soon. I want to be Thursday. I will work in the spa, in a hotel. My customers are from United Kingdom or Germany. I will can practice my English with they. It will be fun, although I hope do well. I will do treactaments, manicures, pedicures, massages and more. In the spa is impossible don't relax you. And I work here. I will go relax all day.

Good job! If I were to try to say this in spanish it would just be a big mess.  I am going to give you  my paraphrasing of it.  I hope it helps.

Hello Friends!  I start work soon.  I think on tuesday. I will work in a spa at a hotel.  My customers are from the UK and Germany. I can practice my english with them.  It will be fun and I hope I do well.  I will do treatments, manicures, pedicures, massages and more.  In the spa it is impossible not to relax. Since I work there I will be able to relax all day.