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My home town I was born in a city called lanzhou.it is located in the northwest of china.which belongs to gansu province. Being lived here for 27 years.i familar with landscape,food,and the charactise of local people,it is comfortable and fit for everybody lived here.i have to say i like it . Many places of interest atrract people all over the world,a great many of tourists come here to enjoy themselves.lan zhou is famous for zhongshan bridge,which has a history of 100 years,built by german.it is heard that all the material was from germany at that time.it is a piece of egnormous work.in addition to this,five springs moutain,white tower moutan,water wheel park are all have good reputation. Lan zhiu is well known for beef noodles,the local people bave a habit to eat a bowl of noodles every morning.also all the tourists come to lanzhou,the first food they appricate is beef noodles.besides this,lanzhou is a fruit city,when it comes to july and august,you will smell the flavour of fruit,such as white melon,huanghe honey,ect. The people in lanzhou are hard working,they try their best to push forward the development of economy and to make their life better and better,.although its economy is far behind other cities,we can make a bit progress day by day. All in all,i i like my home town.

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第一段最后一句"I have to say..."把我逼出来留言了。”have to“一般都有"不得不,只能这么做"的含义在里面,比如Sellers have to please customers这种。用在喜欢家乡前面实在太勉强了吧。然后有很多小的语法错误

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