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The Drunk Man in Train I was in the train commuting from Jhansi to Kannur. There was a drunk man lying unconscious on his berth. He puked all over the seat which naturally appalled the co-passengers. In spite of all the problems the people in the train and the railway police helped him to recover and did not thrown him from the train. Although they were in great rage, they did not allowed to let down their human spirit. I was really impressed by the people's attitude and it made be believe that humanity still exist.

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The Drunk Man on the Train

I was on the train commuting from Jhansi to Kannur. There was a drunk man lying unconscious on his berth (I'd say "bunk", but it's certainly correct). He puked all over the seat which naturally appalled ("shocked" is more casual) the other passengers. In spite of all the problems, the people on the train and the railway police helped him to recover and did not thrown remove him from the train ("throwing" someone sounds too literal, like you pushed him off). Although they were in great rage angry ("enraged" is too strong), they did not allowed it to let bring down their human spirit. I was really impressed by the people's attitude and it made me believe that humanity still exist.

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The Drunk Man in the Train

I was in the train commuting from Jhansi to Kannur. There was a drunk man lying unconscious on his berth. He puked all over the seat which naturally appalled the co-passengers. In spite of all the problems the people in the train and the railway police helped him recover and did not throw ("thrown" is the past participle of "to throw.) him out of the train. Although they were very angry (you cannot be "in rage"), they did not allow that to affect their spirit. I was really impressed by the people's attitude and it made me believe that humanity still exists.

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