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Topic: Phobias and fears I really haven´t big/great phobias. But I tell you some fears that I always have had. When I was a little girl before I was going to the bed I looked under the bed and in the closet. Also I covered my neck because I was afraid of vampires. In general I hate the insects and the mouses. When I was younger in the grape harvest ( en la vendimia) I couldn´t continue if in the grapevine was insects. I hated the insects. ahhh I was afraid that a bee stinged (me picara) my hands. I think that sometime I am a bit cowardly.

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Topic: Phobias and Fears

I really haven´t any  big/great phobias. But I will tell you of some fears that I've always have had. When I was a little girl, before I was going to the bed, I would looked under the bed and in the closet. I also I covered my neck because I was afraid of vampires.
In general I hate the insects and mice. the mouses. When I was younger, especially during in the grape harvest ( en la vendimia) I couldn´t continue if there were insects if in the grapevines was insects. I hated the insects. Ahhh! 
I was afraid that a bee might sting stinged (me picara) my hands. I think that sometimes I am a bit of a coward. cowardly.

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Topic: Phobias and fears

I really haven´t any big/great phobias. But I'll tell you some fears that I always have had. When I was a little girl before I was going to the went to bed I looked under the bed and in the closet. Also I covered my neck because I was afraid of vampires.
In general I hate the insects and the mouses mice. When I was younger in during the grape harvest ( en la vendimia) I couldn´t continue if in the grapevine was there were insects in/on the grapevine. I hated the insects. ahhh
I was afraid that a bee stinged would sting (me picara) my hands. I think that sometimes I am a bit cowardly.

 

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Leigh has corrected your entry very well, really there is nothing that I could add. I cant stand rats, they make my skin crawl, also I have a fear of sharks, I always feel nervous in the sea and I never go far from the shore, I always think about them when I am in the sea. Once I was in the sea in Miami and a shark came very very close to the beach, in very shallow water, everybody ran to the shore.

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