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Twin Lake I still remember all memories when I went to Twin Lake, Solok Regency, West Sumatra. Last year. At the time we were in the campus fieldtrip program for two months. There are two lakes, first ‘Danau Diatas’ or Upper Lake and ‘Danau Dibawah’ or Under Lake. In addition together called ‘Danau Kembar’ or Twin Lake. If you are looking through a map, you can see that Upper Lake position is in the southern of Under Lake. You will see such a beautiful landscape in this place. The best sightseeing is from ‘Bukik Cambaik’ or Cambaik Hill surrounded Under Lake. From Cambaik Hill you can see four lakes: Upper Lake, Under Lake, Singkarak Lake, and Talang Lake. In addition you can also see Mount. Talang and Mount. Merapi. The people here have the strong old belief, they still trust to mystical things. For example if someone is sinking in the Twin Lake, the weather around the Twin Lake will turn into windy rain for couple days, until the death body is found. But after the death body is found the weather change into bright sunny day. Actually I do not believe all spreading tale in the Twin Lake, but it was happened when I was there!! Such underestimate event… This is just a short story about Twin Lake, though many stories is still hidden inside it. Please give correction - Thanks ^^

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Twin Lake

I still remember everything that happened when I went to Twin Lakes, Solok Regency, West Sumatra. Last year at the time we were on the campus field trip program for two months. There are two lakes, first ‘Danau Diatas’ or Upper Lake and ‘Danau Dibawah’ or Lower Lake. Together they are called ‘Danau Kembar’ or Twin Lakes. If you are looking at a map, you can see that Upper Lake's position is south of Under Lake. You will see such a beautiful landscape in this place. The best sightseeing is from ‘Bukik Cambaik’ or Cambaik Hill surrounding Lower Lake. From Cambaik Hill you can see four lakes: Upper Lake, Lower Lake, Singkarak Lake, and Talang Lake. In addition you can also see Mount Talang and Mount Merapi.

The people here have the strong old [traditional?] beliefs, they still trust in mystical things. For example if someone drowns in the Twin Lakes, the weather around the Twin Lakes will turn into windy rain for a couple of days, until the dead body is found. But after the dead body is found the weather will change into a bright sunny day. Actually I do not believe all these tales from the Twin Lakes, but it was happened when I was there!! Such underestimate(?) event… This is just a short story about Twin Lakes, though many stories are still hidden inside it.

Please give correction - Thanks ^^

 

-filed trip is two words

-Mount is not an abbreviation, you don;t need the period after it

-Twin Lake'S'-you need to use the plural because there are two of them

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