About my CV(I need a neat cv to apply for a master programme, please help me)

Profile
I have a good command of English and knowledge of Western history, religions and culture. I am energetic, passionate and diligent, with a deep interest in languages and culture.

Educational Background
Undergraduate:Education XXX University Major: English Status:senior year
Main Courses: English Literature (I don't know if any of the authors you have studied are Scottish, Welsh etc, in which case British is correct, but we tend to use the phrase "English literature", it sounds more natural), American Literature, Introduction to British Society, Introduction to American Society, Basic Knowledge (maybe change this to Introduction to or Foundation in instead of Basic Knowledge of?) of Western Civilization, Comprehensive English, Translation, Interpretation, Linguistics, College German, College French. (I am not sure what you mean by college. Is this the language? In which case, just say German and French).
GPA:3.43

Voluntary Experience
2010.10~2011.7 Tutor for underprivileged children in Shenzhen
Duties: Tutoring two primary school students in English and Maths
2011.7~2011.8 Volunteer at the 26th Summer Universiade (not sure what you mean here?)
Duties: organizing and delivering materials involving diving events for
participants, arranging meals for athletes and coaches and offering
advice on local attractions
2012.9 Volunteer at the 6th China Cup International Regatta
Duties: arranging the agenda of a VIP and assisting in organizing the annual forum
2012.9 Volunteer at Commemoration for the International Day of Peace 2012
Duties:Assisting in the organization of the China Southeast Asia Peace and
Development Forum

Internships
2012.7~2012.8 Assistant in Purchase Department of LightInTheBox company
Duties: Organizing the product information and negotiating issues with
suppliers
2012.10~2013.6 English Assistant in College of Continuing Education at
Shenzhen University
Duty: Answering questions about English grammar, invigilating
examinations and organizing English lectures

Languages
Mandarin: native
Cantonese: native
English IELTS (band 7.0) and TEM-4(10% of the school)
Germany About B1 level (with 300 hours self-study and 201 hours of lessons
taking)

Hi Roxanne - I hope this helps. It was already pretty good, I've just tried to make it sound a little more natural. For a profile on a CV you should write it in first person, which is why I changed that part. Any questions, just ask!

Clare