Mumbai Hello, I would like to write about a travel experience, which i had a few weeks ago. I traveled to Mumbai, India. This city is quite amazing. Such a big difference to the life in Europe. So

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Mumbai Hello, I would like to write about a travel experience, which i had a few weeks ago. I traveled to Mumbai, India. This city is quite amazing. Such a big difference to the life in Europe. So many people, so many cars ( mostly taxis). One of the positive thing of the trip was the extremy friendlyness of the people. While I walked through the streets, a lot of people came to me, asking me where i come from or what i think about India. I talked with a lot of people and learned a lot about the culture in India. But this was just one part of the city --> the good one . One of the bad parts was the extremly poorness of the city. I would say that this problem is obviously the main problem of India. Every day, thousends of people travel to Mumbai to start a new life. They think, that their life gets better but mostly i gets worse. You can see a lot of people, a lot of families sitting and sleeping on the streets.Scary !!! But I dont know any solutions for this problem. All in all, the trip was very interesting. I learned a lot about another country and another culture.

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Mumbai

Hello,

I would like to write about a travel experience, which (i) I had a few weeks ago.
I traveled to Mumbai, India. This city is quite amazing, such a big difference to the life in Europe - so many people, so many cars ( mostly taxis).
One of the positive things (of) from the trip was the (extremy) extreme (friendlyness) friendliness of the people.
While I walked through the streets, a lot of people came to me, asking me where (I) I come from or what (I) I think about India. I talked with a lot of people and learned a lot about the culture in India.
But this was just one part of the city --> the good (one) section . One of the bad (parts) things was the (extremely) extreme (poorness of) poverty in the city. I would say that this problem is obviously the main problem of India.
Every day, (thousends) thousands of people travel to Mumbai to start a new life. They think that their (life) lives will get(s) better but they mostly (i) get(s) worse.
You can see a lot of people, a lot of families sitting and sleeping on the streets. Scary !!!
But I (dont) don't know any solutions for this problem.
All in all, the trip was very interesting. I learned a lot about another country and another culture.

Dein Englisch ist eigentlich ausgezeichnet, viel besser als mein Deutsch. Ab und zu machst du einen sehr kleinen Fehler, aber wie du schreibst und was du beschreibst, finde ich sehr angenehm zu lesen. Das "I" im Englischen wird immer großgeschrieben. Einen Text mit einem kleinen "i" zu schreiben, d.h., mit dem Handy, ist einigermassen in Ordnung, aber das ist kein Standardenglisch. Jeder Satz im Englischen (vielleicht ist es anders auf Deutsch) muss ein Verb haben, ansonsten gibt es was im Englischen heisst: "Incomplete Sentence".

What kaibu is describing is the typical situation in Mumbai city where you'll see everywhere people travelling through public transport, hanging outside local trains, taxis, cars, bikes etc. The life at Mumbai just goes at 1.5 times the speed of life in any other city.

Yes Marie, an average person in India has bike or two wheeler as compared to car or four wheeler in developed country.

Mumbai

Hello,

I would like to write about a travel experience, which i had a few weeks ago.
I travelled to Mumbai, India. This city is quite amazing. Such a big difference compared to the life in Europe. So many people, so many cars ( mostly taxis).
One of the positive thing of the trip was the extreme friendliness of the people.
While I walked through the streets, a lot of people came to me, asking me where i came from or what i think about India. I talked with many people and learned a lot about the culture in India.
But this was just one part of the city --> the good one . One of the bad part was the extreme poverty in the city. I would say that this problem is obviously the main problem of India.
Every day, thousands of people travel to Mumbai to start a new life. They think, that their life will become better but mostly it turns out to be worse.
You can see a lot of people, a lot of families sitting and sleeping on the streets.Scary !!!
But I don't know any solution for this problem.
All in all, the trip was very interesting. I learned a lot about another country and another culture.

India was not a country with mostly motorbikes?

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