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Ukraine flagKseniya Sh.
Haw I started to love children... and not only them It so happened, that I've always been a lonely person. I had a reputation of freak, so... you understand=) That's why I usualy go along streets sadly and keeping my head down. But one day walking like that I've heard shy "Hello". I turned my head up and saw one little blondie with modest look. She didn't wanted to harm me by words, she didn't want to say me what a fool I was. She even didn't know me! She just meet me in the street and said "Hello". Since that I started to notice — little children often greet me. They always speek to me with "vy". "Vy" is symbol of respect in my country. They don't know they should dislike me. They don't understand what adults talk about me. Their hearts are clear... rightly as their souls. Yes, I love children. And I love all the population of the world just because everybody was a child, everybody, maybe, said hello to some weak saving his soul from hate. Thank you, blondie.

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How I started to love children... and not only them

It just happened like this, that I've always been a lonely person. I had a reputation of a freak, so... you understand=)
That's why I usually go along the streets sadly and keeping my head down. But one day , while walking like that I've heard a shy "Hello". I lifted my head up and saw one little blondie with a modest look. She didn't wanted to harm me by words, she didn't want to say me what a fool I was. She didn't even know me! She just met me in the street and said "Hello".
Since then I started to notice — little children often greet me. They always speak to me with "vy". "Vy" is a symbol of respect in my country. They don't know they should dislike me. They don't understand what adults talk about me. Their hearts are clear... exactly as their souls.
Yes, I love children. And I love all the population of the world just because everybody was a child, everybody, maybe, said hello to some weak, saving his soul from hate. Thank you, blondie.

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Haw How I started to love children... and not only them

It so happenedhappens, that I've always been a lonely person. I had have a reputation of for being a freak, so... you understand=)
That's why I usually go along streets sadly and keeping my head down. But one day I was walking like that I've when I heard a shy "Hello". I turned lifted my head up {or "I looked up"} and saw one a little blondie with a modest {"shy"?} look. She didn't wanted to harm me by words to tease me, she didn't want to say tell me what a fool I was. She even didn't even know me! She just meet met me in the street and said "Hello".
Since that then I started to notice that little children often greet me. They always speek to me with "vy". "Vy" is a symbol of respect in my country. They don't know that they should dislike me. They don't understand what adults talk think {or "say"} about me. Their hearts are clear... rightly as like their souls.
Yes, I love children. And I love all the population of the world just because everybody everyone was a child once, everybody everyone, maybe, said hello to someone weak, saving his her soul from hate. Thank you, blondie.

 

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