Can Someone (can) Help Me?

Hello, my name is Nuria and I´m new here. (in this place.) Last September, I was unemployed so thought it an opportune moment to study (I started to study) for a degree in intermediate level (the)  English. (by myself to get the degree of intermediate english level. because I was unemployed and I thought it was a good moment to learn english.) However, it has proved (is) a bit difficult for me because I don´t have anyone to help me with the essays and the correct ions. (,) So, I think this may be a very good place (very good) to get help. I have the exam in a month and I need to improve a lot to pass it.!!! I would appreciate it if someone could (to) help me. I have spent a long time (I) looking for a website such as this.

I offer to correct other essays in Spanish!! A greeting.

Nicely written. You had a lot of information in your second sentence and I have just suggested changing it around a little. Generally your English writing is fine. Good luck with the exam. 

Someone can help me?

Hello, my name is Nuria and I´m new in this place. Last September I started to study english by myself to get the degree of intermediate english level. because I was unemployed and I thought it was a good moment to learn english. However is a bit difficult for me because I don´t have anyone to help me with the essays and the correct,So I think this may be a place very good to get help. I have the exam in a month and I need to improve a lot to pass it.!!! I appreciate if someone could to help me. Long time I looking for a website as this.

I offer to correct other essays in spanish!! A greeting

Can someone help me?

Hello, my name is Nuria and I'm new to this place. Last September I started to study English by myself to get a degree in intermediate level English. Because I was unemployed I thought it was a good time to learn English, however, it is a bit difficult for me because I don't have anyone to help me correct the essays. I think this may be a very good place to get help. I have an exam in a month and I need to improve a lot to pass it! I would appreciate it if someone would help me. I spent a long time looking for a website like this. I offer to correct your essays in Spanish!

Greetings

You've done a terrific job with your English in such a short time by yourself!

I'm also new to this place. I would be happy to help you. I'll go check out your other entries and correct them for you then when I write one you can correct me? Maybe we should friend one another.