My English

Those of you who are close to me know that I've had a rich and personally rewarding time on italki through studying with quite a lot teachers. The teachers have been key in to my learning. It's with strikingly mixed emotions to think about my progress in learning the English language. Sometimes it's exciting while sometimes other times it's frustrating. Having studied with a lot of teachers on italki, today, I'm no longer the person I was before. I have a passion for learning the Engish language. It's never a dull moment when I'm here improving myself. Studying English remains a priority for me to on which continue to my focus on. Lately I've just sort of launched an audit of myself about what I have done. There might have been instances where you one might not find himself/herself yourself as hard working or as aggressive as he/she should. not that hard-working, not that aggressive.

Now I've come to know that the key to success is hard-work plus luck, none of which can be dispensed. with. I wish you all good luck going moving forward. You must be able to find an occasion to do the same audit of yourself as what I'm doing. My conclusion is that I'm doing great! Thanks to each of you for your part in the experience. That's amazing!

Your conclusion is absolutely correct. You are doing great. You have a solid command of the English language. These were just a few suggestions that might increase your writing skill toward a formal level but remember the original writing was just fine if you want to keep it at an informal level. You are on your way and your hard work and study certainly shows! 

My English

Those of you close to me know that I've had a rich and personally rewarding time on italki studying with quite a lot teachers. The teachers have been key in my learning. It's with strikingly mixed emotions to think about my progress in learning the English language. Sometimes it's exciting while sometimes it's frustrating. Having studied with a lot of teachers on italki, today I'm no longer the person I was before. I have a passion for learning the Engish language. It's never a dull moment when I'm here improving myself. Studying English remains a priority for me to continue to focus on. Lately I've just sort of launched an audit of myself about what I have done. There might have been instances where you find yourself not that hard-working, not that aggressive.

Now I've come to know that the key to success is hard-work plus luck, none of which can be dispensed with. I wish you all good luck going forward. You must be able to find an occasion to do the same audit of yourself as what I'm doing. My conclusion is I'm doing great! Thanks to each of you for your part in the experience. That's amazing!

Great job! Keep up the good work :)