A letter to a friend

Dear Li

Long time no see! I'm sorry to hear see that you have become fat. Because you had send me your picture to me. I can tell because of the photo you sent me. One A year ago you are were a slim girl, but now you are over-weight. I know you like eating and drinking junk food, like hamburgers, cola and some other things (give at least one more example then use etc.) I very like them it too. But my mum told me they are it is unhealthy not good for our bodies.So you can should eat less junk food of it like cakes and so on.(you have already given examples of junk food) You should eat (more) vegetables and fruits.They can will make our bodyies become strong and healthly. You also can get good sprits.Being more healthy will also improve your mood. Don't worry, you will lose weight-loss soon. Good luck to you ! ^ ^

You would never, EVER, write this letter. Not if you wanted to keep your friend!

A letter to a friend

Dear Li,
Long time no see ! I'm sorry to hear that you became fat.Because you had send me your picture to me. I know it because I see the picture that you sent me. One year ago,you are were a slim girl.But now,you are over-weight.I know you like eating junk food,like hamburgers ,cola and some other things.I very also like them very much too.But my mom told me they are not good for our bodies.So,you can should eat less junk food.Like cakes and so on.You should eat vegetables and fruits.They can make our body become strong and healthly.You also can get good sprits (what do you mean?).Don't worry,you will weight-loss  loose weight soon.Good luck to you ! ^ ^