My World
My name is Bashaier ,my nice name is Beach or Besho.I learn Japanese & English language , my mother language is Arabic .
I love horses ,painting and many thing more ....
if there is any mistake please correct it ..
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My AMAZING World
My name is Bashaier ,my nickname is Beach or Besho. I'm learnning Japanese & English language , my mother language is Arabic .I love horses ,painting and manythings more ....
if there is any mistake please correct it ..
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Hi, Besho! My name is Zillah, and I'm from the US. I would love to learn Arabic one day, but right now Spanish is hard enough! You certainly speak good English! I can understand everything in your post. I love horses, too. I also enjoy painting, mostly watercolor.
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Okay, what I saw about your post: first we need periods at the ends of sentences and spaces to the right of them, like this one. Then we need to capitalize the first word of each sentence. You don't need the ellipses after "more" and "it;" periods would do. The comma after "horses" should be just to the right of the word, as that one is.
"I learn Japanese" is perfect, but I would leave out the word "language" after "English."
And that's all I saw: mostly just punctuation, which is great for a first post. Please write some more, and I'll be glad to comment on it.
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My World
I love horses ,painting and many thing more ....
if there is any mistake please correct it ..
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And I am study at the University Home economic ...
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