Good friend here
I have a friend in Tuikey from ITALKI. He is a nice person.He will go to army some days later,and he wants to protect his country.I think he is a patriotic boy.It is very scarce,and I am very admire him.
And he give me a good idea,maybe i can take some special local product to his father's market.haha,good luck for me.Maybe i will be a little trader in the future.
Haha,nice dream.
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Good friend here
I have a friend in Tuirkey from on ITALKI. He is a nice person. He will go into the army some days later in a few days, and he wants to protect his country. I think he is a patriotic boy .It Patriotism is very scarce rare ,and I am very much admire him.And he give me a good idea, mMaybe i can take send some special local products to his father's market. haha, good luck for me Wish me luck. Maybe i will be a little trader in the future.
Haha,nice dream sweet dreams.
Here is how I would say it in everyday American English.
I have a friend on italki from Turkey. He’s a nice person. In a few days he’ll be going into the army. He wants to defend his country. I think he’s patriotic. People like that are scarce and I admire them. Moreover, he gave me an idea. Maybe I can send some unique, local products to his father’s market. Wish me luck.. Maybe I’ll be a merchant in the future. Sweet dreams.
In a few days is a common expression. I think the Chinese would be 几天后.
He will be going is a common substitute for he will go. (sb wil be doing sth = sb will do sth)
We usually do not use the word boy is a person is a grown man. Some people do, especially when talking about romance..
This sentence confuses me, It is very scarce,and I am very admire him. You use both it and him, so I don't really know what the subject is. You have a couple of choices here.
1. Patriotisn is rare, so I admire him.
2. Patriots are rare, so I admire him.
3. Patriotism is a rare quality and I admire it.
"maybe i can take some special local product to his father's market" is also a little confusing. The sense is that, if you can take something there, then his father's market is near you. If his father's market is in Turkey, you would send sth there.
Wish me luck! is a common idiom. I think that's what you mean to say here.
Sweet dreams! is also a common idiom.
But remember, the wording in idioms does not change.
In a few days is a common expression. I think the Chinese would be 几天后.
He will be going is a common substitute for he will go. (sb wil be doing sth = sb will do sth)
We usually do not use the word boy is a person is a grown man. Some people do, especially when talking about romance..
This sentence confuses me, It is very scarce,and I am very admire him. You use both it and him, so I don't really know what the subject is. You have a couple of choices here.
1. Patriotisn is rare, so I admire him.
2. Patriots are rare, so I admire him.
3. Patriotism is a rare quality and I admire it.
"maybe i can take some special local product to his father's market" is also a little confusing. The sense is that, if you can take something there, then his father's market is near you. If his father's market is in Turkey, you would send sth there.
Wish me luck! is a common idiom. I think that's what you mean to say here.
Sweet dreams! is also a common idiom.
But remember, the wording in idioms does not change.
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