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What I want to be Now I am 24 years old.I Will graduate from university on June.After graduate what will I do and what can I do,I have no idea.so I am so afraid.I don't know wheather can I feed myself.But let them go.Just to live ,to enjoy life ,just to learn ,just to love,without horror .I know I can do it.Come on girl,just belive youself.

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What I want to be

Now This year I am 24 years old._I Will graduate from university on in June._After graduation, I have no idea what will I will do and what can I can do,_I have no idea._So I am so afraid._I don't know wheather can I will be able to feed myself._But let them go (let what go?)._Just to live, to enjoy life, just to learn, just to love, without horror...I know I can do it._Come on girl,_just believe in youself.

 

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