First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hey,everybody.I‘m new here and wanna see someone can help me in my poor English.Chinese girl here,ordinary and easygoing,want to make friends with u.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hey ~~everybody~~ everyone, (always a single space after comma)I‘m new here and ~~wanna~~ want to see if someone can help me in with my poor English. (always a single space after a period)I'm a Chinese girl, ordinary and easygoing, looking forward to make friends with u (never use short forms, otherwise people won't take you seriously) you.

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