My best friend
Hello! I'm Ana. My best friend is Fran. He's Spanish. He was born in Córdoba, but now he lives in Torrevieja. He's 26. He is tall and very atracctive. He has green eyes and short dark hair. He is thin and he has a beutiful smile.
He is very funny!
He's a student. He studies in the University of Alicante. He has a litle sister, her name is eva. Eva only is 12 years old.
He plays the bass in a group once or twice a week. He is a very good bassist! I always go at his concerts!.
He likes action and history films and series too.
He plays videogames everyday. He's angry a lot of if he don't win.
He isn't only my best friend, it's my boyfriend too.
Thanks for the corrections!
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My best friend
Hello! I'm Ana. My best friend is Fran. He's Spanish. He was born in Córdoba, but now he lives in Torrevieja. He's 26. He is tall and very atracctive. He has green eyes and short dark hair. He is thin and he has a beautiful smile.
He is very funny!
He's a student. He studies in the University of Alicante. He has a little sister. Her her name is Eva. Eva only is 12 years old.
He plays the bass in a group once or twice a week. He is a very good bassist! I always go at to his concerts!.
He likes action and history films and series too.
He plays videogames everyday. He's angry a lot of if he don't doesn't win.
He isn't only my best friend, it's he's my boyfriend too.
Excellent job of keeping the language simple.
Thanks for the corrections!
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My best friend
Hello! I'm Ana. My best friend is Fran. He's Spanish. He was born in Córdoba, but now he lives in Torrevieja. He's 26. He is tall and very attractive. He has green eyes and short dark hair. He is thin and he has a beautiful smile.
He is very funny!
He's a student. He studies in the University of Alicante. He has a litle sister, her name is Eva. Eva is only 12 years old.
He plays the bass in a group once or twice a week. He is a very good bassist! I always go to his concerts!.
He likes action, history films, and some television series too.
He plays videogames everyday. He's angry a lot of if he doesn't win.
He isn't only my best friend, he's my boyfriend too.
Thanks for the corrections!
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My best friend
Hello! I'm Ana. My best friend is Fran. He's Spanish. He was born in Córdoba, but now he lives in Torrevieja. He's 26. He is tall and very attracctive. He has green eyes and short dark hair. He is thin and he has a beautiful smile.
He is very funny!
He's a student. He studies in the University of Alicante. He has a little sister. Her name is Eva. Eva is only 12 years old.
He plays the bass in a band once or twice a week. He is a very good bassist! I always go to his concerts!.
He likes action and history films and series too.
He plays videogames everyday. He will be very angry if he doesn't win.
He isn't only my best friend; he's my boyfriend too.
Thanks for the corrections!
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